Question- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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To be benefited from any public service, anybody have to pay, not only to visit museums and watch how was the ancient life and culture, but in order that to increase the quality of services of museums.

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, it seems to me that, the benefits of paying to get a ticket to stay at museums are more than the drawbacks.

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, the disadvantages of paying to see museums are minor and can be considered. The most important drawback is that, the people who suffer from poverty cannot attend the activities of buildings, but

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can be handled by the management of museums.

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, if a poor family has the passion to stay at a particular gallery, they can give an evidence to the manager's office of the museum that they cannot pay the fees for the tickets, and the manager will subsidize their ticket funds to be able to take a tour at the museum.

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, museums are places where the public visit and spend their time. So, it is logic to pay for the entertainment and enjoy your time. Not only the local residents who go to halls,

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the tourists who inspect a nation have more passionate to learn more about the history of the city the visit, so the institutions must provide them with high quality service.

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, a group of tourists see a particular museum and the tour guide was awful, because he was not well paid,

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, they were disappointed and their reviews and feedback about the place were abominable,

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, the number of guests decreased and the government paid a lot of money to a private company to increase the skills of the guides. So, how can the ministry of antiquities neglect that huge gain and make the admission free?. To sum up, museums' tickets are very profitable to the country and doing it for free will make government to pay more,

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, they have to take care about everything related to museums starting from cleanness, contents, and the services too.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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339 words

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Question- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter: describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

You are arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must changa the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement

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