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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Our
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 is advancing towards globalization.
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, with so many things in focus researchers believe that in the coming era whole globe will be using the same mother tongue irrespective of their cultural or religious beliefs. I personally think that
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 is essential in order to globalize the
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.
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 essay will discuss
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 scenario using the examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey in order to demonstrate points and support claims.
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, unification of mother tongue will make the communication convenient. At
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 moment, it is very difficult to understand some research papers because of their difficult
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.
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, students have to take different
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 courses in order to qualify for a certain university of any specific nation.
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, Oxford University in 2016 conducted a research on the education systems of the globe and find out that most of the students dropped out of the academic institutions because they are not able to overcome the communication gap between instructors and pupils because of their poor understanding of that specific
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. So it is clear from the example, that unified
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system
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 is the need of the day.
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, advocates of
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cultural, language
language
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system
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 believe that if the
world
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 speaking
system
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 is unified and every human being starts talking in the same way, it will destroy the cultural values of that society. But
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 is just an assumption and in reality it will allow the
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 to discover more cultures.
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, our knowledge of forgotten cultures of the
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 will
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increase which
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increase, which
 we are not able to know because those cultures are of local value.
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, survey of Time Magazine in 2016 clearly shows that 60% people reject that idea of any harm to the norms of the society if
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a unified language system
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system
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 is applied
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to
 the globe. So it is clear from the example that people are in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of
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the globalized speaking system
system
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. To conclude, globalization of
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 no doubt, creates doubt among people who are unaware of the benefits of that
system
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. And I am satisfied with the way
language
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 is globalizing nowadays. In the future, we will see real benefits of
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 when people understand the importance of
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 globalization.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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