Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages.

The museums around the world charge people for

admission

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, while few others are free

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generally a museums are part of the historical

cultures

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culture

of the nation, so in my opinion is more better if charging people for

admission

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. In

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essay

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we are going discus two points of view. Like I previously uttered

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Itotally

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I totally

and strongly agree with

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all the

historical

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historic

location

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locations

have to put

aroll whice

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a roll, which

a roll whice

a roll which

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everyone has to spend entrance fees

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and all the money

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change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically

goes

to

adminstration

a method of tending to or managing the affairs of a some group of people (especially the group's business affairs)

administration

of the

place

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to improve facilities in the places

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as adding a library or even garden. Here in Libya we

have Komes

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have come

have comes

came

are come

were coming

are coming

city

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city, for

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example we

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example, we

found the great

place

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are Leptis magna large historical location in

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magna

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in or at that place

there

are no an entrance fee are required,

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the

place

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are

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is

nearly empty

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the

place

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are almost neglacted

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is almost neglected

are almost neglected

by the government and، A lot of people don't know the

place

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. I was precisely when I went with my husband to visit the

place

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. We couldn't find it easily and there was no one to guide us.

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allot of large places in

libya

a military dictatorship in northern Africa on the Mediterranean; consists almost entirely of desert; a major exporter of petroleum

Libya

are destroid

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is destroyed

are destroyed

are distressed

are distorted

and neglected, I thank if there is

admission

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fee will be more alive.

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the

disadvantag

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantage

disadvantages

of

entrence fee

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an entrance fee

entrance fee

that poor people and folks with large family membranes cannot pay for

admission

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and enjoying of the

bueaty

the qualities that give pleasure to the senses

beauty

of the history. To sum up we should bear in mind

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the museums charge for

admissiona re

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admission are

two_edged weapon

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so my

opinon

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

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the government role are the most important factor to prevent the

drowbacks

the quality of being a hindrance

drawbacks

and to

decid

reach, make, or come to a decision about something

decide

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where we should pay and

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where we should not?