Some people are of the opinion that there should be a cae-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.
A number of people believe that a day monthly with no personal cars should be performed.
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, on the bright side, banning the use of a person's own car can lead to less passage congestion. Most of the people have their vehicles nowadays causing traffic jam. Linking Words
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, prohibiting those cars would reduce the number of automobiles on the road resulting in less traffic congestion. Linking Words
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, it is not only beneficial to reduce pollution because of the vehicle exhaust reduction, but Linking Words
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causes less noise.
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, one of the main disadvantages, that could happen, is crowded public transportation because it is the only mean available. Linking Words
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, the limited public transportation is not enough to meet the demands of the huge number of people in the city. Linking Words
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, the bus has limited seatings, so some people will sit while the others had to stand during the trip.Linking Words
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makes passengers tired and uncomfortable, especially who is travelling to work destinations. Another disadvantage is that people cannot reach on time, Linking Words
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, using their own vehicles would let them go anywhere at any chosen time.
To conclude, people think that it is good to prevent the use of private vehicles for 24 hours. It has some benefits including reduction of traffic congestion and less pollution. Other people argue that it has some drawbacks including crowded public transportation and people cannot reach work on time which put them in trouble.Linking Words
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