You are leaving your job and would like to recommend your friend apply for your position.  Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * · describe the job * · explain the reason you are leaving * · tell him/her why you would recommend the job to them

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Dear Rohit, I hope you are doing well, and I’m writing to suggest you for a customer service representative

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under my own employer at Tim Hortons.

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will remain open for the next two weeks, and as you are looking for a part-time

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would be a great fit for you. Your responsibility will be to handle cash and take orders for

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couple of weeks during your training session and after that, you will be trained to make drinks as well. I am leaving

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because I am visiting my family back home and will stay there for three months and won’t be able to rejoin

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, I was thinking that it might be a great opportunity for you to appear for

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. If you’d like I can refer your name to my employer. I am recommending

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to you as the Employer and co-workers are quite friendly, and the

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is not stressful at all. I think that you will like

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as you love to talk and help other people. All the best. Sakshi

Submitted by sakshisyal on Fri Nov 08 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to use more cohesive devices to guide the reader through the text clearly.

Task Achievement

Try to explain a bit more about why this job is a good fit for your friend.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which adds a personal touch.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is warm and encouraging, which fits well with the purpose of recommending a job to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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