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The graphs above illustrate the value of exports’ country in five sorts of products between 2015 and 2016 with showing the changes of its percentages in each special category. In general, we can observe that petroleum products hit the highest rates during the period with 62

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of exports while, looking at both agricultural products and textiles they were the lowest levels in the same years with 31

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of earnings. Beginning with petroleum products and engineered goods we can see that in 2016 the data increased by 3% and 8.5% with about 62 billions of profits,

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, the figures in 2015 show about 61 billions and 58

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billion

of earnings in the same categories. Ending up with agricultural products and textiles we can see clearly both of the rates are under 35 billions of export earnings during the period 2015-2016, as a specific detail in 2016 both of them came with about 31 billions of earnings. When it comes to games and jewellery in 2016 it has a slight fell by 5.18%

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despite the past growth in 2015.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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182 words

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