The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.

The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
The diagrams depict information about existing landmarks inside
Peyton
Park
and proposed changes in the future. It is evident that the landmarks in the
park
have changed and added some facilities
.
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As shown in the figure, the current map of
Peyton
Park
has a
lake
in the centre.
Tennis
court
to the west of the
lake
and a
picnic
area
to the north of the
lake
, the
picnic
area
is very close to the
tennis
court
. Both maps show the parking lot to the south of the
lake
. In order to more convenience to the tourists who come to
Peyton
Park
, the
park
is proposed to make some changes. The
tennis
court
is planned to be relocated to the east of the
lake
, the
picnic
area
will be moved to the north of the
tennis
court
. Located near the
picnic
area
will be a new playground, where the child can go playing. A swimming dock will be added
at
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west of the
lake
.
Overall
, significant shifts can be identified
after
this
replacement;
however
, the parking lot of
the
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Peyton
Park
remains unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words peyton, park, lake, tennis, court, picnic, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagrams
  • current map
  • proposed changes
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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