The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Smoking is dangerous to health which many people know it, but still they get addicted to
habit in a way that they cannot resist themselves into stopping it.
essay discusses both the causes and remedies to smoking.
, smoking is a way of reducing stress and pressure in one’s lives, which is the common reason heard from many people.
is factual, there are people who smoke for pleasure or by the compulsion of their peer groups.
, they get addicted in
a way that they cannot leave the habit and eventually become chain smokers.
For instance
, a colleague at my office is a chain smoker and he told the reason for doing it is because his friends compelled him into it and now, he became dependant on it.
, young adults acquire these mannerisms from their elders right from a small age.
, there are many children who try to steal cigar packets from their father’s pocket and smoke in
secret place
the secret place
secret places
a secret place
For example
, a boy from my neighbourhood started smoking at the age of 12 and he became so
that he used to smoke a packet per day.
few days
a few days
ago he passed away due to lung
cancer which
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cancer, which
is caused due to smoking from a small age.
, there are many ways to reduce smoking in the society like
government can
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government, can
impose heavy taxes on cigarettes. The council can
set up
a rehabilitation in each area and encourage the obsessive people to cigars into joining these centres.
, many attractive campaigns and advertisements regarding the
after effects
of smoking can be put up on televisions and on internets
creating awareness among them. In conclusion, there can be many reasons for smoking, but with the help of the government and
the efforts from
public side
the public side
to minimize smoking,
habit among the people can be controlled.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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