Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sports celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

Medical professionals and academic teaching staff played an important role in any community.

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, some people assume that their salary should be more as compared to media and sports superstars. I personally believe that all professions are the need of the day and we can’t ignore any.

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essay will discuss

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situation using the examples of Oxford University Research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate points and support claims. On the one hand, no one in the society

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the importance of doctors, nurses or teachers. As, life without them is very difficult because they address the moral and the physical needs of that community. Unfortunately, these respected professions are paid less as compared to the media or the gaming professionals.

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, Oxford University in 2015 conducted a research on the necessity of

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the pay scale of

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professionals and mentors of institutions and find out that it will increase the pace of research by twofold. So, from

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of taking these professions as

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have to invest on these professions to get a better output.

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, sports and entertainment celebrities are earning more, as compared to other professions.

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is because, people want to see these celebs more and more and want to live their lives like them.

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, due to the technology development these celebs become the role models of the community from their childhood.

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, a survey of Time Magazine in 2018 suggests the same story that 60% people idealize to become

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starts or football from their childhood because of the glamour behind these trades. So, from

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example, it is clear that these professions are

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the need of the day and can’t be ignored. To conclude, in any society a more balanced environment is

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respect not only media or sports professionals but

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their teaching and medical staff. I personally assume that every profession has its own

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we can’t ignore any of them. In the future,

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media or games will play a vital role in the society

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have to consider doctors, nurses and teachers by giving them the same pay scales which we are giving to the superstars.