People today know fewer of their neighbors than in the past. Why is this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The probability of people knowing their
neighbor
is far less now than in the past. a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
This
trend is mainly due to long working hours and Linking Words
dependency
on technology. Suggestion
depends
However
, there are a number of measures that can be implemented to resolve Linking Words
this
issue.
One of the reasons for realizing limited Linking Words
community
members is due to the increase in the amount of office work especially in urban areas. Because of Use synonyms
high competition
in the consumer market each and every company wants to deliver product on Suggestion
the high competition
Use synonyms
time which
resulted in Accept comma addition
time, which
drastic increase
in effort and Suggestion
a drastic increase
drastic increases
time
required for any employee. Breadwinners has to put in more effort and additional hours to finish tasks within the given Use synonyms
time
period, due to which employees spend less Use synonyms
time
with their friends and family. Use synonyms
In addition
to that, the advancement in technology caused most of the public to communicate via text message or over the phone rather than meeting in person which in turn lead to reduced face Linking Words
time
with each other.
Use synonyms
This
can be resolved using Linking Words
number
of ways so that improvement in knowing each other in the Suggestion
a number
neighborhood
increases. a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
Firstly
, governments and corporate bodies should reduce the working hours of its employees at all levels and adopt flexible working hours so that office workers get more Linking Words
time
to mingle with other fellow colleagues as well with friends, families and Use synonyms
neighborhood
which in turn a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
raises
interaction with surrounding communities. Suggestion
raise
Secondly
, Linking Words
community
Use synonyms
centers
should be built and an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
centres
community
members should be invited to conduct social meetings to meet and greet each other face to face Use synonyms
this
way the communication as well as the sense of bonding between Linking Words
neighbors
can be made strong. I concede that a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
this
would be Linking Words
difficult task but
by Suggestion
a difficult task, but
a difficult task but
these ways
people can come closer together and develop a sense of knowing each other very well.
In conclusion, the lack of Accept comma addition
these, ways
community
Use synonyms
centers
and the wide gap between social circle and local communities lead to disconnect in an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
neighborhood
. Only when governments and corporate bodies are able to ensure its employees about reducing working hours at all levels, will Suggestion
the neighbourhood
neighbourhood
this
situation be remedied.Linking Words
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