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People are using a lot of online language translation app.Do the benefits of these outweigh the disadvantages?

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People are using a lot of online
language
 translation apps. Do the benefits of these outweigh the disadvantages? Recently, there has been a notable increase in the use of online
language
 translation applications.
Ibelieve
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I believe
 that the introduction of these applications have surely bought comfort to everyone in terms of
communication
.
Also
, yes, it has more benefits when compared to hiring a
language
 interpreter. For many decades, top business personals, diplomats and artists have hired
language
 translators –
aperson
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a person
 who translates a set of information from an unfamiliar
language
 to your native or known
language
. These translators were either called in locally or sometimes were made to fly abroad along with
them which
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them, which
also
 costed them a good pool of money annually.
This
 bridged the
communication
 gaps between major nations and
favored
preferred above all others and treated with partiality
favoured
 global business, economic and social reforms as well as mutual growth and development.
However
, in recent years, the demand for
such
language
 translating personnel have been declined drastically as most of the interactions are now conducted using online
language
 translation applications.Engineers have developed fine tools which
converts
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convert
 your spoken audio verbatim into the
language
 of your request for the recipient. These tools and applications
also comes
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also come
 with the feature of tutorials
where-in
(formal) where, in what respect
wherein
 they teach the user how to speak a given sentence along with the proper pronunciation and its grammatical usage.
This
 changed the course of
communication
 across the nations and contributed a lot in improving interaction worldwide. To top that, these applications are far more cost efficient, reliable, instant, portable and most
importantly they
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importantly, they
 make the user independent
from
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of
 any human authority. Summarizing, the usage of online
language
 translating application
s have surely improv
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has surely improved
ed a quality of
communication

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