Learning English at school is often seen as more important then learning local languages. If these are not taught,many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English ?

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Competition always helps you to cross your limits and give your best. Some individuals believe that if somebody cheats in a

game

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game, then

then

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they should not be allowed to play again at a competitive level.

This

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essay differs

form

a giver or sender

from

the above said statement as the player can get depressed and

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

hope.

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, Everybody cheats in life, be it exams or games. There is a point in every game, where you get a chance to win by cheating.

For example

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, in cricket there are many players who

gets

Suggestion

get

caught in fixing the game by taking some money.

This

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is a

cheating which

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cheating, which

the player has done because the rewards are high, as compared to the prizes he will get if he plays

fairly

Suggestion

fair

Thus

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, it is totally because of the

nessecity

the condition of being essential or indispensable

necessity

that one takes

such

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big steps.

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, Punishment is there to help realise the mistake and not to stop the growth. Punishment should be there for every rule

that is

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broken on the field. To illustrate, in football, there is a yellow and red card for foul

play which

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play, which

stops you

from playing few

Suggestion

from playing a few

matches and does not ruin your career.

This

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such

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a good process to make the player realise that he has

done

produced by a manufacturing process

made

some mistake which he should not repeat. To conclude, every

athelete

a person trained to compete in sports

athlete

is a hardworking soul,

thus

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they should be penalised for wrong doings, but not to the extend that they

do not get

Suggestion

will not get

the chance to play their

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

sport in the future.

Therefore

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, I disagree with the individuals who think that players should be restricted if they have broken any rules.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

269 words

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important then learning local languages. If these are not taught,many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English ?

Your opinion

in many countruies, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world scoeity over the the last two centuries. Dicuss this statement and give your opinion.

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