Learning English at school is often seen as more important then learning local languages. If these are not taught,many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English ?

Competition always helps you to cross your limits and give your best. Some individuals believe that if somebody cheats in a
game
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game, then
then
they should not be allowed to play again at a competitive level.
This
essay differs
form
a giver or sender
from
the above said statement as the player can get depressed and
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
hope.
Firstly
, Everybody cheats in life, be it exams or games. There is a point in every game, where you get a chance to win by cheating.
For example
, in cricket there are many players who
gets
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get
caught in fixing the game by taking some money.
This
is a
cheating which
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cheating, which
the player has done because the rewards are high, as compared to the prizes he will get if he plays
fairly
Suggestion
fair
.
Thus
, it is totally because of the
nessecity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
that one takes
such
big steps.
Secondly
, Punishment is there to help realise the mistake and not to stop the growth. Punishment should be there for every rule
that is
broken on the field. To illustrate, in football, there is a yellow and red card for foul
play which
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play, which
stops you
from playing few
Suggestion
from playing a few
matches and does not ruin your career.
This
is
such
a good process to make the player realise that he has
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
some mistake which he should not repeat. To conclude, every
athelete
a person trained to compete in sports
athlete
is a hardworking soul,
thus
they should be penalised for wrong doings, but not to the extend that they
do not get
Suggestion
will not get
the chance to play their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
sport in the future.
Therefore
, I disagree with the individuals who think that players should be restricted if they have broken any rules.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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