Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

In today’s time, some people are of the opinion that almost all
occupation
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occupations
will be replaced by artificial intelligent robots. I am of the opinion that the profession which required no or less skills would be replaced by robots, but highly skilled jobs will still be done by humans. The
work
which
are
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is
less skilled
work
will certainly be carried out by the robots. Hiring a person for a menial job like
security guard
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a security guard
security guards
, parking ticket
checker etc
Accept comma addition
checker, etc.
checker etc.
requires a lot of money for an employer. So, it is highly likely they will deploy robots
instead
of humans which are cheaper and need less maintenance, due to
this
, the company profit will go up.
For example
, in a manufacturing factory, there used to be a lot of workers and now all the
work
has been replaced by machines that was only one time investment.
As a result
, the employers are making huge amount of profits. For
this
reason, unskilled jobs will be replaced by artificial intelligence.
On the other hand
, jobs that require professional expertise and special skills can never be replaced by artificial intelligence.
For example
, psychologists, teachers and doctors are profession which
require
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requires
human interaction, and expertise cannot be replaced. Those
profession
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professions
have taken hundreds of years to develop,
hence
are highly unlikely be replaced by the machines.
Moreover
, robots can do a
work
which is of repetitive nature, a task which requires logical thinking and application of knowledge will not be affected by them. In conclusion, in my opinion, the jobs which require special training cannot be replaced,
on the other hand
, laborious or low skilled
work
will eventually be done by the robots in the future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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