Life now is better than 100 years ago. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people argue that life in the past was tougher than the current era, some think nowadays viability is worse than years ago for some reasons. I personally agree that today is easier to exist than the ancient times.
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, it is generally accepted that alive in the 21st century is a delight for everyone, due to it is easy to go anywhere by various transportations
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as motorcycle, car, ship,
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, etc. Following
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further
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, distance is no longer a problem for people.
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, on the same date, I could go to two different countries with
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the airplane
, it only needs hours to reach thousand kilometre gap by
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.
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, travelling abroad becomes a trend, especially for 20s people.
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transportation, people nowadays tend to cut off the space with telecommunication technology
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as mobile phones and the internet.
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, people could communicate with others from around the world by talking through phones or texting on internet with media social.
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, 100 years ago, transportation and communication technology had not existed yet, back
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, people only walk or ride the horse to severe places,
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most of the ancient carved the stones for addressing the others.
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, food has changed from time to time. It is common to find the fried chicken in most restaurants over the world,
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many people love it.
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, a hundred years ago the ancient human did not eat fried chicken
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they did not know about flour and other spices to make fried chicken. They tend to eat raw meat or vegetables without spices. It is difficult to imagine to eat those foods these days.
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, raw foods contain many bacteria that cause many diseases. Taking everything into consideration, it is my opinion that life in
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current world is more uncomplicated for cutting gap and hour,
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more concern about food, compared with the past period.
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