In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Some people are of the opinion that some nations have body mass increase while having deteriorating
health
conditions. I totally support this
notion because a lot
of individuals indulge in unhealthy eating habits. Furthermore
, the government is passively involved in the health
patterns of the nation.
Firstly
, a lot
of people eat unhealthy foods. This
has a ripple
effect
on the levels of health
and interest
in exercise
. For
instance
, any individual who eats fast foods often is expected to have several health
related disease
as reported by several studies.Firstly
, a lot
of people eat unhealthy foods. This
has a ripple
effect
on the levels of health
and interest
in exercise
. For
instance
, any individual who eats fast foods often is expected to have several health
related disease
as reported by several studies.
Firstly
, a lot
of people eat unhealthy foods. This
has a ripple
effect
on the levels of health
and interest
in exercise
. For
instance
, any individual who eats fast foods often is expected to have several health
related disease
as reported by several studies.Firstly
, a lot
of people eat unhealthy foods. This
has a ripple
effect
on the levels of health
and interest
in exercise
. For
instance
, any individual who eats fast foods often is expected to have several health
related disease
as reported by several studies.
In conclusion, we believe that the government should be involved in providing health
facilities and incentives to allow citizens actively participate in exercise
.In conclusion, we believe that the government should be involved in providing Suggestion
the exercise
exercises
health
facilities and incentives to allow citizens actively participate in exercise
.Suggestion
the exercise
exercises
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- moreover
- also
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- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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