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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many
enquiries
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 were made to a Tourist Information office in one city by phone, letter and in
person
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 from January to June in 2011. In January 2011, more than 800
enquiries
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 were received by letters or emails
while
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enquiries
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 by telephone were less than 800.
In contrast
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, in January, the least amount of
enquiries
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 was received in
person
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, the
number
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 of
enquiries
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 in
person
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 soared significantly over the next six
months
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 and in June, the highest
number
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 of
enquiries
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 was in
person
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 accounting for more than 1800. Surprisingly, the
number
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 of
enquiries
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this
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 task. The graph below shows the
number
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 of
enquiries
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 received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. by letter and email dropped gradually over the next two
months
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 which was followed by a sharp decrease in next three
months
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 becoming the lowest in June, reducing to less than 400. The
number
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 of
enquiries
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 by telephone slightly slipped in February which was followed by a marginal rise in the next couple of
months
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. Over the next three
months
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, there was a significant increase in telephone
enquiries
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 which rose to 1600.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words enquiries, person, number, months with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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