A growing number of people feel that people should not exploit animals and that they should have rights as a human while argue that human must employ animals to satisfy their various needs.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that ov
erexploitation o
f animals is increasing day by day, while some say that it's inhuman to consume them.
This
essay believes that animal utilization for food and clothing of human beings should not consider as exploitation because the animal meat has a nutritious value which deemed necessary for human health. On the one hand, animals are innocents and can not say th
eir w
people in general
they
ish like a human.
Therefore
people have to consider and treat them
accordingly
. The Government has to put hefty fines and penalties for those who hunt them for their businesses.
For example
, a recent survey was published in National Geographic magazine that the horns of Rhinos are high selling commodities because it used to make a specific powder, which helps in enhancing human life expectancy.
However
, I believe that God has created animals to help humanity for their survival;
therefore
, taken particular nutrients in their meat and milk-like cow and chicken.
On the other hand
, I believe animals are the potent source of protein and Carbohydrates, which is necessary for human growth. When children do not get these, they will be having protein deficiencies and not able to gain target weight, which will eventually halt their healthy growth process.
For instance
, recent research revealed by the British Medical Association that over 60% of children in some parts of Africa are suffering from malnutrition because they are not getting enough cow's milk and meat after birth.
Therefore
, I believe animal consumption should not be considered as exploitation. In conclusion,
although
people are hunting the animal for the growth of their business, we must realize, animal products like milk and cheese are good for human health.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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