Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The revolutionary advancements in the modern technology have endowed people with substantial resources for their survival in the best possible way.The variety of facilities enable the people to adopt best possible opportunities in their
life
.
However
, there are sections of society which even don't have the basic necessities of
life
. I partially agree with
this
statement.
To begin
with, with the advancement in preservatives, it is possible to have any particular type of food throughout the year without having to wait for a particular season in which the food was grown.
Secondly
, with the improvements in the transport system, it is now possible to book tickets online rather than going to the railway station for booking the tickets. With the recent advancements, it is possible now to check the running status of any train through the use of internet enabled devices
such
as mobile and laptops.
Finally
, with the latest inventions in the healthcare, it is possible to treat identify and treat deadly diseases. There is,
however
unequal distribution of the positive impact of technology.In many underdeveloped nations people are lacking basic amenities like food, transport and healthcare. According to WHO survey, almost 50% population does not have clean drinking water and 35% living substandard
life
. Job opportunities are limited to developed countries only
as a result
of which undeveloped countries are devoid of these advantages. To conclude,
although
recent breakthroughs in the modern technology make the
life
easier for people in developed countries, but undeveloped nations are deprived of these technological advancements as they still don't have the basic necessities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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