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Nowadays, most people are nog as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions

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The world is constantly changing and part of
today
's challenge is that most people are not as strong and productive compared to the past.
This
 essay will capture causes relating to
this
 issue as well as provide possible solutions. On one hand, the aspirations of
today
 are significantly different from the olden days. The quest to own gigantic properties, run global businesses and have a high standard of living is faced by people of
today
.
This
put
Suggestion
puts
 so many on pressure compared to the history lane where our
fore fathers
the founder of a family
forefathers
 live happily with
there
of them or themselves
their
familities
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
 in a hut and comfortable with their farming business with no pressure of
such
 people face
today
. On
another hand
Suggestion
the other hand
other hand
, the thirst for wealth and development as well as made people indeed on fit,
for instance
, the effect of rising globalization has resulted into global challenges like Pollution, Population congestion, high production of unhealthy
food etc
Accept comma addition
food, etc
; all these have
negative impact
Suggestion
a negative impact
 on men
such
 as poor health through inhaling of poisonous gases, as well
high competition
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the high competition
 for limited resources
such
 as jobs, houses etc. With regards to suggesting solutions, a balanced development be made across board,
for instance
, some cities are more developed than others, which often encourage human migration. If
this
 is put to check by
government making
Suggestion
the government, making
the government making
 sure many cities enjoy development like
others
Accept comma addition
others, then
then
 problems like population congestion can be partly solved.
Also
, encouragement of jobs that are known by our forefathers, very few still practice farming, which translate to poor quality food. Quite a lot of people have adopted industrialized professions because of more money is guaranteed. If people
are encourage
Suggestion
are encouraged
 to do jobs like farming and are properly patronized, it will increase well-being in total. Conclusively, it is a known fact that health is wealth, if people continuously neglect their health at the expense of wealth
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 the generation to come we have nothing to inherit but calamities.
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