Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?

According to
few people
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a few people
, private organizations should facilitate local communities for social services and sports. In my opinion,
although
local companies should participate in these
services but
Accept comma addition
services, but
the ultimate responsibility is
of
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about
government. To start with, small local businesses have a huge impact on
local economy
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local economies
the local economy
in which these are established. These small private firms stimulate local economy by bringing growth and innovation to the
community
in which they operate. Despite of boost in economy at
community level
Suggestion
the community level
, these companies
also
contribute
in
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to
rising national GDP level by providing employment to people who may not be hired by large corporations.
Thus
, in
this
way these privately owned companies are capable enough to provide social facilities like health, education, sports and housing to some extent for people residing in
area
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areas
the area
an area
where the firms are operational.
For instance
, few small business owners participate in well being of their
community
by donating to local non- profits, sponsoring local teams and participating in
community
events. So, overall it can create a good impact on society.
On the other hand
,
state
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the state
is
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has been
always responsible for
welfare
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the welfare
of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
people. So, it is one of the major obligation of a governing body to take care of its nation socially and holistically. The government collects taxes from its people and these should be expensed for
good will
Suggestion
the good will
of the nation.
For example
, in Pakistan twenty billion rupees is collected per annum as taxes and it should be spent for medical, education and housing of people. In conclusion,
government
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the government
has revenue in
form
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the form
of taxes while local small businesses
also
generate
reasonable amount
Suggestion
a reasonable amount
of profit locally. So, both these bodies should work in collaboration for
welfare
Suggestion
the welfare
of
nation
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the nation
a nation
and the total burden should not be placed on a single group as it will not give hundred percent outcome.

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