Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Based on my
experience
of pursuing education
from primary schools to bachelor degree
in university
, I agree that students mostly learn more theories and facts instead
of practicing the skill itself. For example
, during primary school, students were taught on
what to remember things more than why and how. My view, it is still applicable in Suggestion
about
primary stage
of Suggestion
the primary stage
education
. Because the students need to know and remember first
before they could observe, learn and analyze
the subjects they learned. consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
However
, this
pattern continue
to higher stage of Suggestion
continues
education
which are junior and senior high school.
Time spent for
learning Suggestion
in
practical skill
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a practical skill
are
still less compared to Suggestion
is
theories
taught in classes. As students develop knowledge about math formula, we never really figured out what kind of problems could be solved using those Suggestion
the theories
formula
. Another example, Suggestion
formulas
formulae
teacher
taught on what kind of word and formula used for correct and proper sentences in Indonesia/English subjects. Suggestion
the teacher
a teacher
Neverthless
, the practice of presenting, reading, and debating which the catalyst Suggestion
Nevertheless
of
developing the linguistic skills were rarely Suggestion
for
in
happened
during Suggestion
happening
class
.
Moving on to the top of Suggestion
the class
education
ladder, university
/college had certain different method
based on the Suggestion
a certain different method
degree
pursued by the students. As I had left university
with bachelor
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a bachelor degree
degree
, I had done more laboratory activities and field observation way more than I had ever done during the earlier stage of my education
. However
, once I graduated from university
and started to work in a company, it turned out there were so many things university
/college didn’t teach or let us to experience
. Though this
is still debatable as one of bachelor degree
program purpose from universities is said to only prepare the students before they could experience
work, I still think that there should have been more practical skills taught outside the classes. Definite example to
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of
this
statement is the software provided by university
which Suggestion
the university
a university
universities
mostly is not the
updated one and not used anymore by Suggestion
is mostly not the
company
. Suggestion
the company
Thus
, students do not have an adequate knowledge or experience
on how to operate them once they started to work.
I believe, education system
has been revised times to achieve the best method of teaching. Suggestion
the education system
Neverthless
, there Suggestion
Nevertheless
are
always room for improvement based on students Suggestion
is
experience
itself
. the thing named or in question
it
Thus
, there are
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is
lot
of surveys Suggestion
a lot
that
is done
by Suggestion
are done
educator
for the alumnus to fill in, as they’re figuring out what is the outcome of the current method of their teaching.Suggestion
an educator
educators
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