The internet provide us with information about life and culture of different countries and some people say it is not necessary to visit these countries to learn about them. To what extend do you agree and disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and relevant example.

In
contemporary era
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the contemporary era
,
Internet
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the Internet
provides huge services around
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
with the help of different companies of each and every country. Here some people say that it
give
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gives
information
such
like life and
culture
of different
countries
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country
web page
further
information
given below
Firstly
,
internet
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the internet
provides a lot of
information
which is easily readable in many
language
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languages
also
connected every part of
world
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the world
easily by providing their services
such
as news,
informations
a message received and understood
information
, business, online chat,
vedio
the visible part of a television transmission
video
call,
also
a historical
information
and many
trade
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trades
are nowadays are done on
internet
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the internet
. Here
internet
sector has many advantage side
view
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views
are
such
provide a lot of service and
also
provide security and most important is time in
sense
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a sense
the sense
like if we have to purchase a product from one
countries
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country
to another country
instead
of going over their work place visit to
a
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an
online web page of that
sites
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site
and order it.
Further
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Father
with it it is similar
with
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to
it provide a lot of data
to
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for
many countries that we can collect
informations
a message received and understood
information
through all over the
world
easily by through
internet
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the internet
.
Secondly
, learning and collecting
informations
a message received and understood
information
of unknown place which created curiosity to once’s visit over
their
in or at that place
there
here are several informative apps are available in
market
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the market
most of leading is Wikipedia. Which consists each and every
information
of any countries. It
also show
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also shows
history
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the history
,
culture
,
most innovative place
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the most innovative place
most innovative places
which are well known for their countries
also
culture
information
, climate and food. Each and every
information
are provided on it.
However we
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However, we
can say it is similar to
biodata
. Here more over it person point of the view that some extend kind of
information
need you can visit over websites it
a
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an
interest level of each and every one can be different To sum up with
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
internet
provided various
type
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types
of
informations
a message received and understood
information
to
people which
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people, which
they can go
their
in or at that place
there
and collect a huge data on topic of lifestyle Andy
culture
to a any
countries
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country
in a
world
.
That
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That's
a personal view side how much you are interested
weather
introduces two alternatives
whether
you required
information
or not from
internet
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the internet

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