In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.

In today's world we cannot deny that technology has

an

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a

private role in our lives. People use technology

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to do their

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work

faster than past

time but

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time, but

sometime technology lead us a more

mistake

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to help them to use their task faster than

past

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the past

. But a controversial question that arises among people is whether we should work quickly and take

risk eventhough

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risks, even though

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we do our

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work

by

mistake

. Some people

beleives

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believe

believes

believed

that speed is very fundamental in todays world, so we should do our

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work

as soon as possible. The other people think that if you accept one task you should do it correctly and it is more important than speed. I agree with the

second

group because of two crucial reasons. In what follows, I will

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locate exactly

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my causes. The

first

noteworthy reason is that, some of the mistakes are

discompensating

and the companies or people should spend a lot of money or

time

to fix the

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a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problem

.

Hence

, I think each person should do his or her work

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correct, even

though spend a

pelenty

a full supply

plenty

of

time

for that.

For instance

, My friend

zahra

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Zahra

worked for a famous company in

tehran

the capital and largest city of Iran; located in northern Iran

Tehran

. She

always be

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is always being

in

hurry

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a hurry

and did her work

quick

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quickly

without any precise. One day he

did

produced by a manufacturing process

made

a bad

mistake

in his calculation and the company

lose

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loses

a lot of its investment because of her

mistake

.

Therefore

, my friend fired and the company spent a lot of money to

compancate

adjust for

compensate

the

mistake

of her. The

second

convincing reason is that at the

end we

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end, we

can say that the people who works slower and more accurate than the other people can save more

time

.

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A group

of

sientices

a person with advanced knowledge of one or more sciences

scientists

in

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at

Harvard University

design

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designs

an experiment about

this

issue. They investigate two groups of people. The

first

group consists of people who do more risk in comparison to the other groups. At the end of the experiment, people

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who did the risk, did much more

mistake

and they force to

compencate

adjust for

compensate

complicate

their

mistake

.

Hence

, the groups who

works

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work

slower finished their general works sooner than the

first

group. In short, all the reasons

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as mentioned above, lead us to the conclusion that we should do our

works

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work

slowly and correctly. If we did our works correct, we will get a better result at the end.