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You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem.

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Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings! I have received the monthly gas
bill
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 for the
last
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 quarter from April to June and I would like to inform you that I have been overcharged for
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 period. I have noticed that the
meter
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 reading in the
bill
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 and the actual reading
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on
with
of
 the
meter
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 has a huge difference, and
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 is why the
bill
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 was stating the high charges. And
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this
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 is happening
for
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in
second
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 time, the
first
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 time I was not able to make a complaint because I was out of
country
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the country
 and my landlord had to make the payment on my behalf.
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, I understand that
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 is happening because the
meter
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 is located inside the compound and the gate would be locked all the time when I am out. So, I believe the
meter
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 reader had come to my house while I was out so he/she would have not been able to come in and check the actual
meter
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 reading since the gate would have been locked.
I
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My
 apologies for the inconvenience caused and I would like to make a request to you to consider
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 letter as on urgent basis and send the
meter
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 reader once again to check the actual
meter
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 reading and change the monthly
bill
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 for the
last
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 quarter.
This
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 would be very much helpful to me, I will look forward to hearing a
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
 response from you soon. Thanks and regards, Karthik

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