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Nowadays, children have too much freedom. Some people think it may be dangerous in some aspects. Do you agree or disagree?

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In Modern times Children are rewarded with excessive liberty which may be devastating in some aspects. I somewhat agree with the statement, privilege is imperative for the development of young ones.
However
, too much exemption may have some negative impacts.
First
 and Foremost, Privilege is very beneficial for the development of offspring. Their self-confidence and personality improves in society.
Moreover
, Immunity provides opportunities for children to learn life lessons by understanding the right and wrong. After getting liberated, offsprings share their emotion, feelings, ideas very openly.
For example
, Survey has shown that Children who are given sovereignty are the extraordinary performers in any field
such
 as study, sports and social skills.
On the other hand
, too much independence may have many negative consequences.
Firstly
, nowadays, parents do not have time to monitor their kids activities and they provide more flexibility to their offsprings. Guardians send their children away from home to get a good education, but offsprings do not study, they enjoy shopping with friends, watching movies and so on. They enjoy their sovereignty without restrictions of elders.
Furthermore
, They accept the wrong path,
such
 as drinking alcohol or smoking during the adolescence. These bad habits are harmful to their health
,
Accept space
,
 education and career. Too much liberty
also
 changes kids behaviour and they become aggressive and disrespecting with elders. Excess freedom
also
 affects their studies. To recapitulate, There is no doubt to say that children should be given freedom for their overall development but it should not be excessive. Children should be given limited immunity and parents should keep an eye on their children.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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