Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?

#influence #people #clothes #shoes

Advertisement, marketing a product using different media sources, is the main technique to reap more benefits by burgeoning the sales of that particular product. Marketing, definitely, provokes/motivates people to buy new clothing and footwears. The most important consideration is, people end up buying the wrong products as they blindly start trusting the products after watching the advert.

This

is because, not only are they showing the fake information, but

also

more inclined towards bullying the people.

For example

, shoes advertisement

that is

telecasted on the television, gives an impression that XYZ

brand

shoes are the world's best shoes and individuals buy those products blindly without checking the authenticity.

In addition

this

, cheap quality products can be sold at sky-touching prices after giving them a

brand

name and the local business suffers due to

this

. Under the influence of advertisement, everyone is becoming the part of same crowd/following the flock of sheep to buy big companies' clothes and sandals. To solve

this

problem, there should be a regulatory body to check the quality and authenticity of the marketed products.

This

will ensure that anything,

that is

being advertised, is not just to lure the customers

instead

is a genuine and authentic product.

Secondly

, eminent personalities should consider verifying the background details of a

brand

and, only after

this

, they should become the

brand

ambassador of a company.

This

is the only way that big brands will not be able to brainwash people. To cite an instance, in our local area cable channel, channel owner does not allow telecasting any fake information to mislead people.

Therefore

, our city is free from any problems caused due local adverts. In conclusion, television breaks may lead to various kinds of issues

such

as deceiving people and impacting local business's growth, but under the umbrella of a regulatory body these problems can be resolved easily.

Fri Dec 20 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

310 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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