It Is Better For Students To Live Away From Home During Their University Studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people are claiming that,
home
is not a better palce
for students to stay, while they are pursuing their higher studies a point located with respect to surface features of some region
place
.
In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement and I believe that students should live with their parents at Accept space
.
home
for better results.
To embark on, firstly
, students who stay away from parents are tend
to highly exposed to the alcohol, smoking and drugs which are eSuggestion
tending
xtremly
dangerous habits for a sto a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
tuddent
especially. Students who are addicted to drugs may ruin their life by making wrong decisions in their career. a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
student
students
For instance
, as per recent survey conducted by Indian institute of technology, the pass percentage of students who stay apart from their parents is very less compared to them who stay at home
. Secondly
, students at the age of university education have freaky
aSuggestion
a freaky
nf
fragile mindset, so there are easily attracted towards bad things and get spoiled.
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
Furthermore
, during the university education, students require proper guidence
from the parents and to dsomething that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
guidance
icuss
their future goals, so that parents help their children tto consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
o acheive
their dream by providing required things. Many students, who pursue higher studies far away from Suggestion
achieve
to achieve
home
are tend to get h
ome sick
by being worried about family and llonging to return home
homesick
oose
their concentration on studies. fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
Moreover
, students who stay in residential hostel are eating malnutrition food and becoming unhealthy. For instance
, my cousin who lived in a PG hostel during his universty
education, was hospitalised for a month due to food poison.
To conclude, the body of faculty and students at a university
university
home
is always a better place to live, especially for students during university studies should live at home
because they need family support and parents guidence.
something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
guidance
Also
, students at this
age can be esaily
distracted from the studies due to some harmful activities like drinking, smoking and drugs.with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
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