People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the cause and effects of widespread drug abuse by young people. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. Give reasons for your answer.

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Avoiding
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of
life
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and repeat doing the same things is a good way to keep the happiness of
memory
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, but changing to a new good thing is better because changing can let you grow up (physical and mind) and it can delete some of the sad
memory
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. The
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reason for changing of
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is growing of thinking and the physical body. People
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their mindset and open their world when they
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their place
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as travelling, moving home, and changing their job. They will meet other people who have different opinions, and they will learn new things from others. Mr Mee,
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, he is an investor in my country. He always goes abroad for meeting new people to exchange his investment experience, and he
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gets a new idea or strategy for investing from them. If people stay in the same place, they will not have a new idea or friend. The
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reason is changing of time will remove a bad
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. Most people have an unpleasant situation in their
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is better than clear memories since they will not repeat their sadness again and again.
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more than the
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time with her. I just miss her and commit to be a good grandmother like her in the future. Granted, doing the same situation is the good things since it can keep the old happiness, but changing is better because it can bring another happy
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. People cannot find new happiness if people only do the same things, live in the same place, and chat with the same person. Moving out of the comfort zone is the things that they have to do and they cannot avoid changing if they live if the world that there are changing many things all time. In conclusion, I prefer to
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because it brings me to a good new experience for improving my
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and I do not want to stay in bad
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Substance abuse
  • Exploitability
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Recreational use
  • Legal ramifications
  • Preventive measures
  • Rehabilitation
  • Psychological well-being
  • Stigmatization
  • Decriminalization
  • Detrimental effects
  • Dependency
  • Proactive intervention
  • Mentorship
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