The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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in the nuclear family the differences in
age
between parents and their sibling has risen up compared to the past
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the advantages and disadvantages of
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outweighed
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age
of marriage has increased and
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reflects
the
difference
in
age
between parent and sibling and it has
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come
up
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They are in different generations
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The advantage of that issue
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one The
age
of
mother
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the mother
mothers
became older between 25 to 35
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that's
mean mother can care children better cause in the past female was married early she was just young adult and didn't feel responsible about marriage and children.
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father is responsible about sibling more and he has more experience of the life and skills
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So it will help to build strong family so it reflect to the community and
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number of divorce will be
reduce
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reduced
if parents are Older and if older couple will choice to be married
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They will be good mindset and responsible
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In
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any of various alternatives; some other
another
view the disadvantages of
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differing
different
age
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sometimes is difficult to understand new generation.
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differently
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their thoughts and valve has changed
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And
old parents usually don't understand that
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Try to care children like the past. Problems of understanding and dealing with
teenages
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
things
teen-agers
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should be solved
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difference
of moods and mindsets so few families will be separated and weak
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However
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think parents should be read and educate more about dealing with their children and children should respect their
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parents
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the
difference
of
age
between parent and kid has positive. And negative
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more compared to worse point.

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