Workers in Korea have too many rights and it affects a company’s efficiency. Do you agree or disagree with this idea, giving examples.

In
today
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today's
todays
’ society, more and more employers put an emphasis on their rights at workplaces. While some insist that as Korean workers try to exercise their rights the productivity of companies decrease, it is flawed argument.
This
essay, I will articulate as to why I disagree with the former opinion and explain
benefits
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the benefits
of protecting
employers’ right
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an employers’ right
the employers’ right
employers’ rights
for companies. Above all, allowing workers to exercise their rights protects them from being exhausted. Many recent researches revealed that the serious implications of burn-out. Those who do not take sufficient rests can burn out easily and their
work
performances are below the average. To alleviate
this
problem, some companies are implementing a policy which providing at least twelve days of vacation per year
to
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for
all workers including newly recruited ones.
In addition
, the government
also reduce
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also reduces
has also reduced
the maximum working hours to ensure enterprises not to harness their employees excessively. After these changes, workers can find balance between
work
and life, improve their health and maintain their or
efficiencies
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efficiency
as well.
Moreover
, when
employees
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employees'
employee
rights are protected, they can fully concentrate on their tasks. It is because they can deal with both
work
and family responsibilities.
For example
, in Korea, for employees in private enterprises, taking maternity or paternity leaves is not easy. As their employers tend to fire or penalise them who want to take it.
As a result
, they give up the right to take care of their babies and cannot focus on their
work
as they worry their kids who have to sent daycare
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
from too early ages.
However
, if mother and
father
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father's
wage-earners are allowed to have sufficient time to raise their kids, after they return to their
work
, they would display their
ability
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abilities
to the maximum as there are less concerns about their kids. To conclude, the productivity of companies is not affected negatively because of the protection of employees’ rights, rather it would allow them to maintain their
work
efficiencies.
Thus
, their rights should be secured for the individual worker and the companies as well.

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