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Many of today's most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation.

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International cooperation requires to sort out many of urgent problems like terrorism, environmental issues. Urgent issues which most of the countries are facing can only be resolved with
support
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the support
 of their allies as in solving
such
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 matters it requires technology, money, army
,
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,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
. One single
country
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 might be facing
a
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an
economical
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economic
 downside or might not have required technology advancement. World these days have
United Nations
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the United Nations
 for the same which has many
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country
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countries
 participating and try to resolve the matter of different issues of every
country
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 which is in crisis. The recent Issue of Amazon-Fire was something which is
problem
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a problem
the problem
 of one
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country but
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country, but
 eventually every
country
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 tries to participate as
destruction
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the destruction
 of natural resource can have a widespread problem and can
also
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 cause major destruction in
future
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the future
.
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, not every problem requires international contribution like
kashmir
an area in southwestern Asia whose sovereignty is disputed between Pakistan and India
Kashmir
 issue, which was matter of India and other countries should not entertain into the personal matters of individual countries as it can affect their friendship. In conclusion, International cooperation requires in the matters which is major and from which an individual
country
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 cannot recover but it should not be
entertainend
pleasantly occupied
entertained
 within internal matters of a specific
country
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.

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