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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, more and more people are choosing e-books over
paper
 books. I am totally convinced by the people's choice. The number of advantages in e-books easily outweigh the disadvantages. As
everyday there
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everyday, there
 is a new technology coming up, we are moving towards a digital country. E-books have become handy and
also
 comfortable for a person to read it anywhere. A person will always have a phone during
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 and is easily accessible.
On the other hand
, carrying
paper
 books every time becomes difficult. In a scenario where India is suffering from global warming less use of
paper
 will
also
 help the country. If the
paper
 books are rising that means more
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
 are cut to make
paper
 books.
Furthermore
,
paper
 book will
also
 occupy some space in your
house but
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house, but
 e-books can be stored online on the cloud storage for free. On the whole, e-books are providing advantages in two ways:
Firstly in
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Firstly, in
 terms of environment and
secondly
 in terms of making the country digital.

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