the table shows information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries
This
table shows how much people
spend on frequently consumed and used stuff in the year of
2002. the study Change preposition
apply
conducted
in five different countries, which are Add a missing verb
was conducted
Iraland
,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey.
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Ireland
Overall
, Most people
in these countries pay more money on
food, drinks and smoking in which Turkey is Change preposition
for
on
the top of the list. Change preposition
at
However
turkish
Change the capitalization
Turkish
people
also
are among the highest society who considerablly
spend on education and leisure activities. Italian are Correct your spelling
considerably
considerable
more keen
to spend on clothing and shoes.
First of all, Turkish Replace the words
keener
people
pay around 32.14% of their annual budget
for cooking and smoking followed by Irish
who spend 28.91%. Correct article usage
the Irish
While
the rest of the countires
spend Correct your spelling
countries
comparable
amount of their Add an article
a comparable
budget
which is around 18%.
secondly
, clothing with foot wear
expenses took about 9% of the annual Correct your spelling
footwear
budget
of Italy. the other four countries pay between 5.4% to 6.6%.
lastlt
but not Correct your spelling
lastly
last
the
least, the Correct article usage
apply
overall
expenditure of Correct article usage
the turkish
turkish
annual Change the capitalization
Turkish
budget
on education and fun activities, reach 4.35% which is the highest among other
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others
in contrast
to spain
which spent only 1.9%.Change the capitalization
Spain
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