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Many people believe that we have become a ‘disposable’ society, throwing things away rather than repairing them and reusing them. Why do you think that is? What are some of the possible problems this can cause?

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In today’s world, many people have become more prone to throwing away broken items rather than fixing them.
This
 essay will discuss the possible reasons for
this
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 and the side effects of
such
 practice. Because we are currently dealing with a rapid living-style, people
don’t have
Suggestion
doesn’t have
 time to waste waiting for an old article to be fixed for a
second
 utilization.
Therefore
, buying a new one will save them time and energy. Waiting for a computer to be fixed,
for instance
, can cause a person valuable work-time,
in contrast
, buying a new one may save that time.
Moreover
, the rapid technological advancement pushes people
to
Suggestion
into
 replacing their electronic devices
instead
 of sending them to be repaired, fearing that they could become obsolete and
unuseful
 unlike their recent versions.
Thus
, people would replace their broken items
instead
 of giving them a
second
 chance. But
this
 new-adapted habit has a bad effect on the environment. Disposing important quantities of metals and adhesives lead to a substantial growth of harmful waste, which could lead to poisoning planting soil and affecting the quality of grown food. A recent American study claimed that fruits and vegetables produced by developed countries suffered from a lack of nutrients due to the poisonous elements discovered in the dirt’s formula; the extracted elements were mainly
metalic
containing or made of or resembling or characteristic of a metal
metallic
 leftovers. To recapitulate,
this
essays
Suggestion
essay
discussed
Suggestion
discusses
 that the need for quick fixes due to the current
life-style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
lifestyles
 and keeping up with technological evolution are the main reasons of the non-reuse of broken items, but
this
 act has an environmental penalty,
such
 as affecting the quality of the food we consume.

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