You have just finished a trip booked through a travel agency, but you are not satisfied with it Write a letter to the travel agent. In your letter, you should say: Why you felt so unhappy? What happened? Make some recommendations about what the travel agent should about it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the "Marina cruise" I recently went with our company, I travelled on Victoria 111 from the 1st to 15th of December, and I was shocked by the standard of
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and accommodation Which they order on
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with, I was disgusted by the size and condition of the cabin. It was very small and dirty unlike the 'large deluxe cabin' that your advertisement promises. What is more, there is no private bathroom in the cabin. I was appalled to find that I had to share the bathroom with several passengers, in spite of that fact I specifically requested that I need a private bathroom when I booked the trip To make matter worse, the
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on board
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was very unsatisfactory.
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your advertisement promises a
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restaurant with gourmet
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, the
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was
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very poor standard. I feel I am entitled to a full refund for the cost of
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and a write
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apology to provide
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misinformation contain in your advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding
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information as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Bhuvanesh
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