In many modern societies grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grand parents. What do you think are consequences of this?

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Elder people are the roots of cultures and traditions of any country.

However

, with the advancement of t

echnologhy,

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

lifestyle of people has changed totally. Y

ougsters

Suggestion

Youngsters

do not get sufficient time for their grandparents. The upcoming e

assy

Suggestion

easement

easy

easements

essay

easiest

issue

would d

isscuss

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

discusses

discussed

the various reasons. There are manifold reasons why young people are not able to spend time with elderly people?

First

and f

ormost

ranking above all others

foremost

is g

enreation gap,

Suggestion

a generation gap

generation gap

the generation gap

in other words

, there are a plenty of differences in thinking of young people and senior citizens. Youth like to use their gadgets like mobile phones, laptops, tablets and so on, whereas, e

leder

a person who is older than you are

elders

do not like these. Because of

this

youngsters keep track of their grandparents and do not talk with them more often. To exemplify, when i

refers to the speaker or writer

was college going girl, my grandmother did not like my clothing and accessories even she refused me to use social networking sites.

This

made me irritated and i

refers to the speaker or writer

stayed away from my grandmother. In the twenty-

first

century, people are migrating from c

ountry area

Suggestion

the country area

a country area

country areas

to urban area which has resulted in nuclear families. It is

therefore

that young children have to stay with their parents for more opportunities and for better education.

That is

why, they are supposed to live far away from their grandparent and unable to spend b

est

Suggestion

good

time with. To conclude,

although

life has become b

usy

Suggestion

busier

Accept space

relation of youngsters and their grandparents should not be obstructed.

Sat Dec 28 2019

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In many modern societies grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grand parents. What do you think are consequences of this?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfied job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinon.

Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.