Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each crime. others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, University students are opting for subjects as per their interest and concentrate on it
such
as science and technology, mathematics and many more, which would be better for their future. While Others believe that Universities should teach topics to their students, which is helpful for their career orientation.
This
essay will discuss both views with a reasoned conclusion.
To begin
with, the freedom of selecting subjects at university would make education more effective and would not force students to choose a particular course.
For example
, if an undergraduate fellow got scored highest marks in any topic and want to continue their career in the same field, but their parents are forcing them to select any other topic rather than his personal choice. In
this
condition, a student is getting more confusing during the selection.
Moreover
, if a student chooses the text as per his interest so definitely he would perform extravaganza in their academics. Is choosing a subject as per any individual's interest play an important role in life or not? The answer is absolutely yes.
On the other hand
, people feel that the University should provide subjects which will be beneficial for any individual's career. Though technology-related subjects are quite important and Universities keep the focus on it broadly.
For example
, if a student performs good results in science while unable to score passing marks in mathematics so it is the responsibility of facilities along with parents to cope up and teach them that every subject is valuable and equally important for the future. In conclusion, the University should give more focus on quality education with an individual's choice. Everyone has their choose,
however
, take other subjects important for a bright future. According to me, all the subjects are valuable throughout life and give focus in all courses but don't neglect completely.
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