There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? You should write at least 250 words. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

There is no doubt,

musics

have a duty on cultures in the world,

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hatever it is local or international, i

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am going to argue that both traditional and international kinds of

music

, in my opinion international

music

more important than local

music

. On the one hand,

musics

are one of most important part of human’s life,

this

is because

musics

make people relax and refresh their mind.With regardless, they are local

musics

or not.

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it helps people to avoid their stress. To give a clear example

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am keen on to listen c

alssical

of or relating to the most highly developed stage of an earlier civilisation and its culture

classical

music

in particular

with saxophone instruments,

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henever i

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perceive (sound) via the auditory sense

hear

this

type of

music

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do feel good.

Musics

have different types of style, jazz

musics

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ock

musics

, classic

musics

etc.Each of these types of

musics

have their instruments(

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uch as,

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best for rock

musics

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). These types of style differ from age of people. To illustrate, youth people would like to listen action

musics

and elder people prefer to classic

musics

. It

also

depends on place, where people are live in. On the

second

hand, it is considered by many that international

musics

are more significant than traditional

musics

. It can be clearly seen that some emotions are common in the world.

For example

, loving,

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appiness,

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adness,

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reedom things like those. And

also

musics

are expressed these types of emotions.

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is why people a

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are preferring

prefer

are preferred

to listen international

musics

. As an example, people listen Micheal Jackson for dancing or they listen Adele, because she is g

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a good composer

To sum up,

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some people prefer to listen their local

musics

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strongly believe

have strongly believed

that international

musics

are better than regional

musics

.