Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.

It is observed that most of the items
such
as food, electronic devices and so on that we purchase are invented in other nations. While it helps to develop international business with those countries, I believe that it results in the devastation of local traders. The main advantage of buying other
country
's
product
is that it enhances the trade with an international organisation. By
this
way, the economy of the
country
will improve which helps the people to get a quality
product
.
For example
, most of the electronic items
such
as smart phone, tab, iPad are made in another
country
provides quality products and bought by most of the people. Despite
this
, I believe that the price of the item cannot be afforded by all the people and it may not worth for people in privileged status. As for the drawbacks are concerned, the predominant disadvantage is that it impacts the local businessperson.
That is
to say that they cannot compete with an international organisation.
Also
, people tend to buy the
product
based on the brand rather than local
product
and
hence
it will lead them to shut down their work.
For instance
, in India, most of the small scale and large scale business are closed due to the low sales of their products in the local market.
However
, in my opinion, it may lead to loss the job for more workers working for their own land and
hence
people should buy native items. In conclusion,
although
buying different nations
product
aid the
country
to have worldwide trade by providing quality
product
, it affects the inhabitants work by closing their business and
hence
people should get the products that are made in their homeland.
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