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A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
technology
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 took the attention all over the
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, While some people believe that it is vital in our daily life. In my opinion, I agree that living in a
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age
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 has more positives rather than the negatives.
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, the benefit of living in the
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 of
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 is connecting with others. People nowadays can contact and saw each other from the one side of the
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 to other side easily with the help of a video calling system which is one of the greatest creations of
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, my brother lives in Canada who always called me on Skype and my mother saw him as well as talked to him for a long time.
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,
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, making the life easier in
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age
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, the disadvantage of living in the
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, which is teenagers easily addicted on the social sites which is increasing in all over the
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 for the negative use of
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, young people spend the full time on the social sites
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, they are loosing the focus to study which is a bad news for the upcoming society.
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, recently, my cousin failed in exam who always spend the time on Facebook. To Conclude,
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 can create some dangerous problems in the society. To summarize, living in the
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age
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 has some benefit to live well and connected.
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, the negatives are addicted on the social sites as well as producing crimes. After thorough analysis on
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, I agree that living in the
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 will always be greater than the disadvantage.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dependent on technology
  • digital platforms
  • instant communication
  • automation
  • advanced software solutions
  • access to information
  • educational resources
  • screen time
  • health issues
  • eye strain
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • privacy concerns
  • cybersecurity threats
  • identity theft
  • data breaches
  • overreliance
  • face-to-face social interactions
  • social skills
  • isolation
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