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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it’s wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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In the salad days of m
illennium,
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the millennium
 the society is polarised in two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether one should conduct a
marriage
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 for
love
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 or settle with a wealthy partner. Different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note. To commence with the
first
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 notion,
love
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 plays a vital role in the
marriage
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. There are myriad things to be shared in its favour.
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 and foremost, m
arried couple
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a married couple
in
love
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 e
xpress
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expresses
more care and understanding towards each other.
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, partners are happier which will be inevitable in the future.
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, fondness for each o
ther give
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other, give
rise to the better emotional connect among married c
ouple.
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couples
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, depleting the probability of
marriage
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 to fall apart. Shifting towards the
second
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 school of thoughts, it is believed that the stronger financial stability of p
artner
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partnership
results i
nto
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in
a successful
marriage
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.
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, the practice of marrying for the money has drastically allured the youth.
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, due to the inflation in the economy, an individual lacks the wherewithal to pay for luxury items.
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, umpteen masses look for a rich partner to f
ulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their desire for l
uxurious life.
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a luxurious life
 Having discussed the arguments and counter arguments, I would like to infer that deep affection and attachment are the key components for an individual’s happiness in the alliance they share between each other. To justify my state of mind, there is an instance of an article published in T
imes
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the Times
n
ow which
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now, which
depicted that d
ivorce rate
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the divorce rate
a
re
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is
lower among couples who are in deep
love
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 irrespective of their income levels. Hammering the
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 nail, I believe that it is essential for a conjugal life to have
love
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, affection and bonding between each other
instead
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 of relying on the money owned by the spouse.

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