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The Internet provides us with information about life and cultures of different countries and some people say it is not necessary to visit these countries to learn about them. to what extent do you agree or disagree? give your opinion and relevant examples.

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Within the digital era we live in today, acquiring
information
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 about other nations became easier than decades ago. The internet has shrunk the whole world and eased the process of getting knowledge, which drove me to argue that travelling abroad is unnecessary, whereas knowing about foreign cultures could be achieved by surfing different websites. In
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 essay, I will explain my idea, supporting it with salient examples. To commence with, choosing to travel
distantly
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distances
distance
 is usually exorbitantly expensive and takes a long
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.
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 can be seen,
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, in the flying to Indonesia, in which the air ticket would cost around two thousand riyals per person
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 to the daily expenditure there;
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, it is an eight-hour-flight from Saudi Arabia, where I reside.
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, if attaining
information
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 about foreign countries via the internet is replaced by visiting them, it would be
waste
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a waste
 of money as well as space.
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 means that
such
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 means to acquire knowledge is not the right course of action, from my perspective. In stark contrast,
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, it can hardly be denied that, nowadays, individuals could attain countless pieces of
information
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 about other countries freely in short
time
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. Take,
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, Mohamed Elsayed blogger, whom imparted a multitude of culture and life aspects about Indonesia within just hours through his free YouTube channel
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In fact,
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 unpaid and easy-to-access platforms are deemed as
irreplaceable chance
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an irreplaceable chance
the irreplaceable chance
 to save both money and
time
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.
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, had it not been for these complementary web-based sites, which explore faraway places in details, illustrating
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 with photos and videos, high deal of money and
time
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 would have spent to reach
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 content. By way of conclusion, the advent of technology paved the way for its users to be abreast of an array of
information
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 pieces by merely clicking on search buttons.
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, I
am wholeheartedly believe
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wholeheartedly believe
 that these effortless and affordable routes of getting knowledge about other cultures substituted, firmly, other traditional ways
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 as travelling.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • authentic experiences
  • first-hand experiences
  • face-to-face conversations
  • cultural practices
  • bridging cultural gaps
  • personal growth
  • problem-solving skills
  • adaptability skills
  • online resources
  • real-world experiences
  • misrepresentation
  • biased
  • emotional connections
  • virtual exploration
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