All vehicles burning fossil fuels should be banned and electric Motors should replaced them.

All vehicles running on patrol and gases should be
disallowed and
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disallowed, and
in place of these vehicles electric automobiles should be introduced. In my point of view
,
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,
i
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I
am agree
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agree
have agreed
am agreeing
with it because electric automobiles are more
environmently
for the environment
environmentally
friendly and economically less expensive
.
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.
As vehicles running on patrol and gases released the harmful chemicals and gases in the air which became the environment more polluted.In
otherway
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another way
other way
electric vehicles not discharge any gases like carbon dioxide and will be helpful in reducing the global warming. As well as due to run on electric batteries these cars are very simple in structure and their maintenance expenses are
low
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lower
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than
conventional cars. In
conclusion government
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conclusion, government
should play their role by disallowed these vehicles and will make the availability of electric motors easy.

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