In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.
Although
such
topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement. A constructive dialogue on - distractions such
as employment may affect a person
's learning process - can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, in this
essay I'm explaining why I agree with the above statement.
Employment is some sort of work
committed to a company. This
is because when the company is paying salary for the work
assigned to him, and hence
not possible to say an excuse. For example
, a person
has to work
eight
hours a day when he is employed. Therefore
, the aforementioned discussion shows that the person
will get only 16 hours in his learning and daily rest.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that due to the employment work
pressure it is not possible to concentrate on learning once person
left his work
for that day. Because an eight
hour work
can make him tired. For instance
, once the eight
hour work
is completed, he needs to take rest for at least an eight
hours within the next
16 hours to compensate his mental stress. This
gives only the remaining eight
hours for his studies, and it creates a very tight schedule between the work
and sleep.
In conclusion, this
essay discussed the reason why only less than 8 hours is available for studies while a person
is doing an employment. The equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, underlines my opinion.Submitted by mohan.matt on
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