It is believed by the people that the health will be worse in the future compared with today despite the development of technology.
In today’s world,
rapid growth
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the rapid growth
technology
is affecting every aspect of our lives whether
it be personal or professional. Many people think that Accept comma addition
lives, whether
health
will only worsen in future even
after Suggestion
the future, even
the future even
such
advancements in technology
. I am in favor
of promote over another
favour
this
statement because technology
have
its own demerits Suggestion
has
such
as the harmful radiations from electronic devices, addiction and over reliance on technology
etcetera
.
To start with my
reasons, Accept comma addition
with, my
technology
connects the world and for such
connections it requires improved network to send and receive data. However
, more the devices get connected more they leave radiations which impacts our health
directly. New York Times, one of the most reputed news and magazine service, published a survey result which shows 70% of the participants of the survey were effected from the mobile radiations. In future
, this
trend is only going to grow and resultantly the health
of people will deteriorate.
Moreover
, it is not just the harmful radiations but
over dependence on Accept comma addition
radiations, but
technology
also
going to impact our health
negatively. For example
, when we have google search facility
which provides us any information we want, we do no try to remember anything as we highly rely on google, which leads to weak memory. With Suggestion
a google search facility
the google search facility
this
high reliance on technology
people will be more lethargic in future
and prone to diseases such
as obesity and hypertension.
In conclusion, technology
is making our life easier but
at the same time giving us Accept comma addition
easier, but
health
issues which will only grow in future
. I will recommend limited use of technology
that too with proper statutory warnings to make people aware of the health
issues they might face because of that specific technology
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