In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think ate the main causes of crime? How can we deal with these causes?

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There has been
hike
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hiking
in
crime
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rate in many countries,
as a result
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of easy access to guns and other dangerous weapons; and
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, poor standard of living of
majority
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the majority
a majority
of the citizens.
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the above stated reasons and
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the possible solutions. The rate of violent and non-violent
crime
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has been on the increase recently in many nations around the world, because of the ease of acquiring guns and weapons by the criminal elements in the society, either legally or illegally, for carrying out their vice on the innocent citizens. Like the USA recently, there has been an increase of gun violence among individuals, which has resulted
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the death of many, because most citizens can easily acquire any weapon of their choice.
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has led many groups to clamour for a more stringent gun control policy. Another reason for the rise in
crime
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rates in many countries, is the poor standard of living of the people. In
Nigeria
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Nigeria, for
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, there is an upsurge in kidnapping, rape, stealing and murder in the core North,
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is a result of years of neglect by the government due to poor leadership and corruption. So the people have no choice but to resort to
crime
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as self help.
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, the upsurge in
crime
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can be curtailed by;
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, the Government's active involvement in enacting an effective gun control policy, restricting the easy access to guns and other dangerous weapons, as
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will go a long way in solving the problem.
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, Political Leaders in
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a position
of authority should do all
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necessary to improve the living conditions of their citizens, to avoid a total breakdown of law and order, and possibly leads to anarchy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • propensity
  • recidivism
  • deterrent
  • rehabilitative
  • judicial system
  • corruption
  • socioeconomic
  • alienation
  • stigmatization
  • decriminalization
  • enforcement
  • gentrification
  • preemptive measures
  • intervention strategies
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