With all the problem in the world today spending money on space exploration is a complete waste of time and money. The money could be better spend on other caus. Do you agree or disagree?

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exploration

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is an advanced field which helps us know the un-explored regions of

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vast universe, spending huge amounts of monetary and human resources in

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field can be kept on pause for the time, until, some major problems in the current world scenario are addressed

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unraveling the mysteries of the universe can be better used to tackle some of the evident world problems like water crisis, global warming etc. We as humans should focus our time and money on medicine and on improving quality of life. These resources can be better put to use to eradicate existing diseases and researches around it.

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, with the rise in diseases like Ebola, swine-flu and dengue, plethora of flora and fauna species are at the risk of extinction.

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, even homo-sapiens have not been spared from the risks of

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diseases.

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, the money can be better spent on preserving existing resources on the earth. Global warming is one

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issue which goes un-noticed and should be addressed immediately compared to any

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program which can wait until alarming issues

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as water scarcity and deforestation are solved.To illustrate

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, in the

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decade, we have had over twenty

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missions, most of them failing due to minor technical issues like the

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-X and NASA

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missions.

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means humungous amounts of capital and time of some of the most brilliant minds have been put to waste with no scope of usage in the near future. I

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the fact that funding of

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exploration

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missions should be put on hold until the basic needs of survival and well-being of mankind in the current world are resolved

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

285 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Space exploration
Technological advancement
International cooperation
Investment in science
Socioeconomic issues
Sustainable development
Resource allocation
Global collaboration
Humanitarian aid
Space debris
Fiscal responsibility
Interstellar
Celestial bodies
Spacefaring civilization
Earth-bound problems
Space race
Disparity
Innovation
Frontier of science
Long-term investment

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With all the problem in the world today spending money on space exploration is a complete waste of time and money. The money could be better spend on other caus. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Advances in computer technology allow young adults to work from home and children to study at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative change?

Topic: Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

1.Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sport, while others think it is negative. discus both views and give your opinion

Living in a a country where you have to speak foreign Language can cause serious social. problems, as well as practical problems. To What extent do you agree or dis agrees

in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.