Many people say that movies and TV programs affect us negatively while others say that they are two influential and useful media for us. How do movies and TV affect us?

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movies as well as TV programs has been a

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promoting or enhancing well-being

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to consider or examine in speech or writing

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in a harmful manner

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in an incorrect manner

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everything that is included in a collection and that is held or included in something

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contents

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consider in a comprehensive way

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