The best way to solve world's environmental problems is by increasing the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Solving the world's environmental problem is by increasing the

fuel

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rate is debatable. Some people claim that

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is the best way. I completely disagree with

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statement because there are other ways like using electric driven vehicles and by encouraging people to walk or use cycle

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of cars or motorbikes.

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, increasing the

fuel

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rate is not a permanent solution to solve environmental issues.

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, using electric vehicles which are

ecofriendly

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will tackle our environmental

pollution

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issues.

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, they do not burn

fuels

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fuel

or release toxic substances to the atmosphere.

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, these vehicles run on battery charging and they are quite reasonable.

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, they reduce sound

pollution

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as they have soundproof engines.

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, Japan has shown a remarkable drop in the levels of environmental

pollution

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after the introduction of these electric vehicles.

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, these

ecofriendly

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vehicles can solve the environmental issues as they do not burn the

fuel

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, by encouraging people to walk or cycling can help in resolving environmental issues. Walking or cycling will not only give health

benefits but

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benefits, but

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be of a great way to protect

environment

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the environment

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, by walking to work places everyone will have individual satisfaction in their contribution to the environmental issues.

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, government must

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reward all those who go to work places by walking or cycling.

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, I got perks as a token of appreciation from my CEO as I go by walk to my office often. In conclusion, unfortunately, hiking the

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rate may not be of use in solving environmental issues to a large extent.

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, using electric cars or by walking or cycling seems to be a

permanant

continuing or enduring without marked change in status or condition or place

permanent

solution to the global environmental problem of

pollution

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