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Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In the salad days of
millenium
Suggestion
the Millenium
Millenium
millennium
, for the economic growth of the country,
business
 plays a vital role. Majority of company meetings and trainings
are occur
Suggestion
occur
 online.
However
, the advantages of
this
 trend outweigh the disadvantages. Now,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 discuss my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are multifarious advantages from which it is
analyse
Suggestion
analysed
 that the
business
confrences
a prearranged meeting for consultation or exchange of information or discussion (especially one with a formal agenda)
conferences
conference
 are beneficial.
First
 and foremost, employees who belong to the information technology has to make the new projects and presentations in laptops. So, rather than visiting the office they like to stay at home and show their projects by video calls. Owing to
this
, workers can save their time. Not only
this
, people
also
 do not feel homesick by
this
 development. Because they do their work in the corner of the home with their family. On the other side, there are
also
 some disadvantages which cannot be neglected. The primary one is, sometime in the homes there is the problem of internet connection from which the workman could face the problems in making the assignments and dealing with the client as well as doing discussions through the
skype
Suggestion
Skype
. Due to
this
, artisan can ruin their own
business
 by themselves. All the aforementioned standpoints
takes
Suggestion
take
 me to concrete interference that
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
 of online
business
 are far more than the disadvantages.
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